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Sta.sh
As an animator in practice, there are a few things I'd like to point out.
The entire animation looks a little... choppy, the way she (i'm assuming it's a she) walks in doesn't feel right. either the frame rate is two slow or it's something to do with the lines. I don't do drawn animation, but this is all from what I can see. Secondly, the sound effects. The only sound effects are the walking sound effects so obviously there isn't much to go on. But I feel that the two sounds you used don't fit to what she was wearing. The sound effects I hear sounds like a woman walking in high heels or something along those lines. She's wearing sandals, so instead of the "high heels" sound it should sort more of a slide to it.
That's just my two sense. Just thought I'd let you know.
So.
Obviously. An applaud is in store.