keep in mind that when she swings the cannon, the momentum makes it lighter. when she lowers the cannon onto her shoulder, the down and up is her taking up the weight and adjusting her aim cock her shoulders and hips to balance the added weight.
this all flows nicely until she lifts the launcher...it feels like she holds the position just a little too long and its a little jarring. dunno if thats what you were going for.
your right. it does look off when she lifts the launcher. I figured once I do the clean up, it may look better. Thats why I leave everything as a rough so I can fix everything when I do a second round.
when she lowers the cannon onto her shoulder, the down and up is her taking up the weight and adjusting her aim
cock her shoulders and hips to balance the added weight.
And I expected nothing less.
I know foreshortening must've been hard as fuck to animate. You're a brave man for even thinking about doing a scene with such dynamics.